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    ID : th***** 2024-05-23 11:28

    • The moment before the sun rises is the darkest. Endure your struggles and strengthen yourself with more open-minded attitude for the life and keep your beliefs for love and devotion.
    원어민 강사 첨삭 2024-05-23 23:03
    • (o) The moment before the sun rises is the darkest.

      (x) Endure your struggles and strengthen yourself with more open-minded attitude for the life and keep your beliefs for love and devotion.

      (o) Endure your struggles and strengthen yourself with a more open-minded attitude towards life, and maintain your beliefs in love and devotion.

      FINAL:
      The moment before the sun rises is the darkest. Endure your struggles and strengthen yourself with a more open-minded attitude towards life, while maintaining your beliefs in love and devotion.
  • 254

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    ID : th***** 2024-05-21 12:35

    • Nothing is more important than leaving our comfort zone. So, please, make sure to surround yourself with good people with positive thoughts and visions for the future. You are worthy enough, and you will have a time to make your dreams real.
    원어민 강사 첨삭 2024-05-22 13:02
    • X: Nothing is more important than leaving our comfort zone. So, please, make sure to surround yourself with good people with positive thoughts and visions for the future.
      O: Nothing is more important than leaving our comfort zone. Therefore, please surround yourself with positive-minded individuals who share visions for the future.

      X: You are worthy enough, and you will have a time to make your dreams real.
      O: You are worthy, and you will have the opportunity to turn your dreams into reality.

      Nothing is more important than leaving our comfort zone. Therefore, please surround yourself with positive-minded individuals who share visions for the future. You are worthy, and you will have the opportunity to turn your dreams into reality.
  • 253

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    ID : th***** 2024-05-09 14:31

    • The next chapter of your life will be full of a lot of joy and happiness. As if every flower has their own season, your flower must be blooming with amazing clolors and fragrance.
    원어민 강사 첨삭 2024-05-10 18:13
    • original text:

      The next chapter of your life will be full of a lot of joy and happiness.
      As if every flower has their own season, your flower must be blooming with amazing
      clolors and fragrance.

      The next chapter of your life will be full of a lot of joy and happiness. (good)
      The next chapter of your life will be filled with lots of joy and happiness. (better)
      The next chapter of your life will be filled with so much joy and happiness. (best)


      As if every flower has their own season, your flower must be blooming with amazing
      clolors and fragrance. (wrong)
      As if every flower has its own season, your flower must be blooming with amazing
      colors and fragrance. (correct)


      Edited text:

      The next chapter of your life will be filled with so much joy and happiness.
      As if every flower has its own season, your flower must be blooming with amazing colors and fragrance.
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    ID : th***** 2024-05-06 09:54

    • Yesterday we had a family dinner meeting but I couldn\'t enjoy the main dish for diet. In fact, I should avoid high calories food such as fired meals and greasy salads. So, I prepared my foood in a small lunch bag embroidered with my name. It is really useful to carry any food.
    원어민 강사 첨삭 2024-05-07 17:20
    • [x] Yesterday we had a family dinner meeting but I couldn\'t enjoy the main dish for diet
      [o] Yesterday, we had a family dinner meeting, but I couldn\'t enjoy the main dish due to my diet.

      [x] In fact, I should avoid high calories food such as fired meals and greasy salads.
      [o] In fact, I should avoid high-calorie foods such as fried meals and greasy salads.

      [x] It is really useful to carry any food.
      [o] It is really useful for carrying any food.



      Yesterday, we had a family dinner meeting, but I couldn\'t enjoy the main dish due to my diet.
      In fact, I should avoid high-calorie foods such as fried meals and greasy salads.
      So, I prepared my food in a small lunch bag embroidered with my name.
      It is really useful for carrying any food.
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    ID : th***** 2024-04-25 16:54

    • In marketing, funsumer products depend on the outstanding brand images and positive effects that each company has regardless of their qualities. Therefore, people often present such a fun item to their friends even if it is an useless gift.
    원어민 강사 첨삭 2024-04-26 14:05
    • (x) In marketing, funsumer products depend on the outstanding brand images and positive effects that each company has regardless of their qualities.
      (o) In marketing, consumer products depend on the outstanding brand images and positive effects that each company has, regardless of their qualities.

      (x) Therefore, people often present such a fun item to their friends even if it is an useless gift.
      (o) Therefore, people often present such a fun item to their friends, even if it is a useless gift.

      In marketing, consumer products depend on the outstanding brand images and positive effects that each company has, regardless of their qualities. Therefore, people often present such a fun item to their friends, even if it is a useless gift.