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1:1 영작 교정

1:1 영작 교정

영작 실력 업그레이드 시간 이거 맞아요? 틀려요?
실력있는 원어민 강사의 영어 첨삭 지도가 무료!
이제 한국식 영어 표현은 NO!
당신의 영작 실력을 업그레이드 해드립니다.
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  • 220

    완료

    ID : th***** 2023-12-06 07:38

    • a) Will you make a cup of coffee for me?
      b) Can you get me a cup of coffee?
      c) Will you bring me a cup of coffee?
      d) Can I have a coffee, please?
    원어민 강사 첨삭 2023-12-06 14:44
    • These constructions are all CORRECT:

      a) Will you make a cup of coffee for me?
      b) Can you get me a cup of coffee?
      c) Will you bring me a cup of coffee?
      d) Can I have a coffee, please?

      In making requests, all four expressions are all grammatically correct, but they have different connotations.

      The modal \"can\" is a more polite way to ask than \"will.\" The modal \"will\" is used to ask if someone is willing to do something. In general, it is best to use \"can\" when you are making a polite request, and \"will\" when you are making a direct request.
  • 219

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    ID : th***** 2023-12-05 07:45

    • Here are some othere ways to motivate yourself and inspire your coworkers as a leader. First, read more books as possible as you can. No matter what kind of books. Just read what you\'re interested in and attracts your interst. Second, communicate with a lot of people at various ages in open mind. It will help you to be a good listener. So, you will be able to respect others\' opinions and help them to accept differences for mfunthamental decisions.
    원어민 강사 첨삭 2023-12-05 18:52
    • [X] Here are some othere ways to motivate yourself and inspire your coworkers as a leader.
      [V] Here are some ways to motivate yourself and inspire your coworkers as a leader.

      [X] First, read more books as possible as you can.
      [V] First, read books as much as you possibly can.

      [X] No matter what kind of books.
      [V] It doesn\'t matter what kind of books you read.

      [X] Just read what you\\\'re interested in and attracts your interst.
      [V] Just read whatever you\'re interested in and what attracts your fancy.

      [X] Second, communicate with a lot of people at various ages in open mind.
      [V] Second, communicate with a lot of people of all ages with an open mind.

      [X] So, you will be able to respect others\\\' opinions and help them to accept differences for mfunthamental decisions.
      [V] Moreover, you will learn to respect other people\'s opinions and help them accept individual differences in making fundamental choices.


      FINAL:
      Here are some ways to motivate yourself and inspire your coworkers as a leader. First, read books as much as you possibly can. It doesn\'t matter what kind of books you read. Just read whatever you\'re interested in and what attracts your fancy. Second, communicate with a lot of people of all ages with an open mind. It will help you to be a good listener. Moreover, you will learn to respect other people\'s opinions and help them accept individual differences in making fundamental choices.
  • 218

    완료

    ID : th***** 2023-11-23 23:58

    • I watched a big match between Korea and China two days ago. It was getting more exciting as each game was going on. I could see how Son Heung-min leaded his team as a leader. All Korean players had a perfect game. It was the best of the best.
    원어민 강사 첨삭 2023-11-29 07:34
    • X: I watched a big match between Korea and China two days ago. It was getting more exciting as each game was going on.
      O: I watched a big match between Korea and China two days ago. It got more exciting as the game progressed.

      X: I could see how Son Heung-min leaded his team as a leader.
      O: I witnessed how Son Heung-min led his team. He is a true leader.

      X: All Korean players had a perfect game. It was the best of the best.
      O: Moreover, all Korean players had a perfect game. It was the best of the best.

      I watched a big match between Korea and China two days ago. It got more exciting as the game progressed. I witnessed how Son Heung-min led his team. He is a true leader. Moreover, all Korean players had a perfect game. It was the best of the best.
  • 217

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    ID : th***** 2023-11-20 16:48

    • 1) I\'m ten years old.
      2) I\'m ten-year-old.
      3) I am a ten years old boy.
      4) I am a ten-year-old boy.
    원어민 강사 첨삭 2023-11-29 14:43
    • 1) I\'m ten years old. (correct)

      2) I\'m ten-year-old. (wrong)

      3) I am a ten years old boy. (wrong)

      4) I am a ten-year-old boy. (correct)
  • 216

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    ID : th***** 2023-11-18 21:16

    • a) She sent me a message with attached files about Jane\'s and Michael\'s sepeeches. It was very clear to understand what they are insisting on.
      b) How much pain do you have or feel?
    원어민 강사 첨삭 2023-11-20 15:30
    • [x] She sent me a message with attached files about Jane\'s and Michael\'s sepeeches.
      [o] She sent me a message with attached files about Jane\'s and Michael\'s speeches.


      [x] It was very clear to understand what they are insisting on.
      [o] It was very clear to understand what they were insisting on.


      [o] How much pain do you have or feel? OR
      [o] How much pain are you experiencing?




      a.) She sent me a message with attached files about Jane\'s and Michael\'s speeches.
      It was very clear to understand what they were insisting on.

      b.) How much pain are you experiencing?